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The Atlas of Missing RoadsCHAPTER 3Teen

The Courier's Bargain

At the bridge camp, Elias meets a guide who knew Lena. To follow her trail, he must help a courier crew reach Rill—and learn when to leave a road closed.

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Previously on The Atlas of Missing Roads…A recap by the writer

Elias's attempt to reopen the harbour route revealed a different staircase and let a six-legged creature into the valley. Mara was injured helping him escape; Ivo distracted the creature with a rattling tin. Elias learned that a passage stays open only while he holds his breath. A letter requesting medicine for Rill bore Lena's uneven-winged bird, giving him a new lead.

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The camp smelled of onions.

After everything on the hillside, Elias hadn't expected that.

A woman stood over a blackened pot beneath the first pillar of Bellweather Bridge. Washing hung between two tent poles. Someone had left a pair of boots beside the fire, soles turned toward the heat.

He stopped at the edge of the canvas roofs.

From here, the bridge no longer looked distant enough to be beautiful. Its nearest pillar rose out of the ground like the wall of a cathedral. High above, broken stonework ended against open sky.

Ivo took his medical bag from Elias.

“Sit down before you fall down.”

Mara pointed to a crate.

“Not that one.”

Elias stopped halfway through sitting.

“What's in it?”

“Glass.”

He found another crate.

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The woman at the pot handed him a bowl.

“Eat.”

“Thank you.”

“Give it back when you're done.”

For a moment, he didn't know whether she meant the bowl or the food.

Then she smiled.

Elias took a spoonful.

Hot onions. Beans. Something like barley.

He was so hungry that the first bite hurt.

Across the fire, an elderly man sat repairing a leather strap. His white hair was tied at the back. A mustard-coloured scarf lay over a coat that seemed to have been mended with pieces of several other coats.

A crooked walking stick rested against his knee.

He looked at Mara's bandage, then her bare shoulders.

“Where's the cloak?”

“On a tree.”

“Good tree?”

“Orin.”

“Expensive cloak.”

“I noticed.”

The old man pulled his stitch tight.

“And this?”

He nodded toward Elias.

“Elias,” Mara said. “He opened a passage up by the south gate.”

Orin stopped sewing.

The woman beside the pot looked up.

Mara lowered her voice.

“We closed it. A crawler got through. Ivo put it in the drainage ditch.”

“Don't send anyone up there tonight,” Orin told the woman.

She nodded and went to speak to a man stacking firewood.

Orin put the strap aside.

“Did it bite you?”

“No,” Elias said.

“Good. Eat.”

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Elias kept eating.

He had prepared himself for questions about the doorway. Instead, Orin asked whether he had water, whether his boots were wet, and whether he could move the fingers beneath his bandage.

It was difficult to feel mysterious with soup running down his wrist.

Mara sat beside him.

“We leave at first light,” she told Orin. “For Rill.”

The old man looked toward the missing middle of the bridge.

“Which way?”

“That's what we need to discuss.”

Elias lowered his spoon.

“I want to come.”

“You haven't heard the discussion.”

“Your letter has my sister's bird on it.”

“I know.”

“Then I want to come.”

Mara took his empty bowl.

“Finish the bread first.”


After supper, Orin spread a map on a flat packing case.

Elias leaned closer automatically.

The paper had been repaired badly. A thick patch covered a tear near the bottom edge. Someone had drawn a road across it without joining the lines on either side.

He reached for the corner.

“Careful,” Orin said.

“I repair these.”

“Maps?”

“For a living.”

Orin moved a lantern nearer.

“Then tell me what's wrong with it.”

Elias examined the patched road.

“The edges don't match. Whoever repaired it shifted the paper.”

Orin smiled faintly.

“I meant the routes. But you're right about that too.”

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Mara set a finger on the river.

“We're here. Rill is there.”

The settlement lay on the far side of the valley, beyond the broken bridge.

A road wound south through hills covered in tiny ink marks.

“Can we walk around?” Elias asked.

“Usually,” Orin said. “Seven days if the weather holds.”

“The messenger took that road six days ago,” Mara added. “The lower section washed away after he passed.”

Elias looked at the map again.

“Another crossing?”

“Upstream. Twelve days.”

There were twenty-three sick people in Rill.

He remembered the letter's short sentences. Supplies nearly gone.

“What about a boat?”

“Rapids below us,” Orin said. “Waterfalls above. A ferry could work farther south, where the road's washed out.”

Elias sat back.

They had considered the obvious things.

Mara unrolled a cloth bundle beside the map. Inside were sealed packets and six small bottles cushioned with wool.

“This is what we're taking. Ivo needs to check the sick when we arrive.”

“I'm carrying half the supplies,” Ivo said. “She keeps trying to carry all of them.”

“Your bag has room.”

“My shoulders have limits.”

Mara ignored that.

“The messenger said the old path to Rill has a marker with Lena's bird. Orin knows where the path used to start.”

Elias looked at the old man.

“You knew her?”

“I met a young woman called Lena. About nineteen years ago.”

His spoon had left a wet mark on his trousers. He stared at it while he decided which question to ask first.

“Did she have burned hands?”

“One was wrapped when we met.”

“Where did she go?”

“East. I took her as far as a town called Vey.”

“What happened after that?”

“I don't know.”

The answer hurt less when Orin didn't try to soften it.

“She was looking for a way back to a harbour,” he added.

Elias lifted his head.

“She wanted to go home?”

“She asked about it every morning.”

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For a moment, Elias could hear her asking.

Not politely. Not once.

Every morning.

“Did you find a way?”

“No.”

The lantern hissed.

Mara folded the medicine cloth.

“I can give you food, somewhere to sleep, and passage with us to Rill. Once we're there, I'll help you ask about Lena.”

“And you want me to open the road.”

“If there's one we can use.”

“What if I can't?”

“We'll find another way.”

He watched her wrap the bottles.

“And if I can, but it leads somewhere dangerous?”

“Then we don't go through.”

It sounded simple enough around a lantern.

He remembered the black shape sliding up the steps.

“What if I don't know until I've opened it?”

“That's why we look first,” Mara said. “And why nobody stands in front of you.”

Elias looked at her bandage.

“I thought I was helping with the cloak.”

“I know.”

“I don't want to hurt someone again.”

“Then don't try to prove you can do everything.”

She tied the bundle.

“Tell us what you can do. Tell us when you're afraid. We can work with that.”


Orin took them to the back of the nearest bridge pillar.

A metal grate covered a low opening at its base. Beneath it, a stone gutter carried rainwater down the slope.

“The old workers' passage,” he said. “Used to come out on the other side of the pillar.”

“What happened to it?”

“Collapsed.”

Elias looked at the stone beside the grate.

Two faint white lines met in a curve.

An arch.

He had been looking straight at it for several seconds before he realised the others couldn't see it.

“There,” he said.

He traced its shape in the air without touching it.

Mara moved to one side. Orin joined her.

Ivo set his bag down well away from the opening.

“Tell us before you take a breath,” Mara said.

Elias nodded.

“There'll be rubble inside,” Orin warned. “You're looking for the passage that was here before it fell.”

“I can't choose which one appears.”

“Then tell us what appears.”

Elias flexed his injured hand.

He used the other.

“I’m trying now.”

He inhaled, held his breath, and touched the white curve.

The grate stayed where it was.

Beside it, the stone became an open arch.

A narrow tunnel ran straight through the pillar. There was no rubble. At its far end, a rectangle of evening light fell across the floor.

Elias could see a man's boots outside.

The man walked away without looking in.

Orin held his lantern near the opening, keeping his arm outside.

“That's the old passage.”

Elias's chest tightened.

He let his breath go.

Stone returned.

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Ivo counted on his fingers.

“Eight.”

“Eight what?”

“Seconds.”

Elias looked at the wall.

It was barely wider than his spread arms.

He had been imagining an entire crew walking across a vanished bridge.

Eight seconds might be enough for this short tunnel. It wouldn't get all four of them across the missing stretch of bridge.

“I could try longer.”

“Later,” Ivo said.

“I used to swim.”

“Then you know holding your breath while frightened is different.”

Orin picked up a pebble.

“May I?”

Elias nodded.

They stood in the same places.

He took another breath.

The tunnel opened.

Orin rolled the pebble along its floor. It reached the far end and struck something with a small, clear click.

Elias exhaled.

The tunnel vanished.

“Where did it go?” he asked.

“The pebble?” Orin said. “Other side, if that's where the passage led.”

“If?”

“I'll check.”

He walked around the pillar.

Elias waited, rubbing the bandage on his palm until Ivo gently moved his hand away.

Orin returned with the pebble.

“One tunnel,” he said. “One pebble.”

He put it in Elias's hand.

It was absurd how much that helped.

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“Could the passage close on someone?” Elias asked.

All three of them were quiet.

“We're not finding that out with a person,” Mara said.

“What happens if I cough?”

“It closes,” Ivo said. “As far as we've seen.”

Elias looked from the pebble to the wall.

“Then nobody goes through until we know the crossing is short enough.”

Mara nodded.

“And if I raise my hand, everyone steps back.”

“Agreed.”

“I might say no.”

“You can say no.”

He closed his fingers around the pebble.

It wasn't a way home.

But it was the first thing he had opened without having to run from it.


The camp settled early.

Ivo checked Mara's bandage again. Orin repaired the map patch with a little paste Elias borrowed from the woman who cooked.

Elias showed him how to align the torn edges before pressing them down.

“Hold it there.”

Orin did.

“Don't smooth it yet.”

“I wasn't.”

“You were leaning.”

Mara glanced at him.

He realised what he'd said.

For the first time that evening, she smiled.

The patch dried beneath a flat board.

Orin found Elias a blanket and a place under one of the canvas roofs.

“Keep your boots where you can find them.”

“Are we expecting trouble?”

“We're expecting morning. It causes trouble enough.”

Elias sat on the folded blanket.

The battery on his phone had dropped to thirty-eight percent.

He opened the message to his father.

Still no answer.

He typed slowly.

I'm safe. I met people who knew Lena. I'm trying to find a way back.

He stared at the words.

Safe seemed generous.

He changed it to:

I'm alive.

Then he added:

I'm sorry I didn't tell you about the map.

The message stayed unsent.

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He switched the phone off to save the battery.

Around him, people were rolling themselves into blankets. Someone complained about a stone beneath their bed. Somewhere farther along the camp, a child was being told that one more story really did mean one more.

Elias lay down.

His father would be at the harbour.

Or perhaps the phone's clock meant nothing here, and nine o'clock at home hadn't come yet.

He couldn't choose which possibility frightened him more.

He put the pebble beside his satchel.

He slept badly, but he slept.


At dawn, Mara brought him a pair of wool socks.

“Yours are still damp.”

“Whose are these?”

“Clean ones. That's the useful distinction.”

They ate bread standing up.

Ivo packed the medicine in a separate padded bag and made Elias carry water instead.

“You're already carrying enough things you're worried about dropping.”

Orin took the dried map from beneath the board.

He turned it over.

Elias watched him search the surface.

“Looking for something?”

“A note I thought I'd written.”

There was nothing on the back.

Orin frowned, folded the sheet, and tucked it away.

They followed a path behind the pillar.

The camp shrank below them. Smoke rose from the pot again.

Orin's stick tapped the stones ahead. Behind Elias, the bottles in Ivo's bag clinked softly.

He was beginning to recognise the sounds of the people he travelled with.

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They climbed for nearly an hour.

Mara kept her injured arm close to her body. Once, when the slope steepened, she stopped rather than reach for a root.

Elias offered his hand.

She took it.

No speech. No lesson.

He helped her up, and they kept walking.

At the top stood a stone post, half buried in grass.

A small bird had been scratched into its surface.

One wing longer than the other.

Elias knelt.

He had expected to feel certain.

Instead, he thought of Lena sitting on the harbour wall, arguing that she was doing it less wrong.

Could a scratch in stone really be enough?

He touched the bird.

Under his fingers were several shallow lines where someone had tried to draw the longer wing, rubbed it away, and tried again.

She had always done that.

“Here,” he said.

Orin set his stick against the post.

“The old service road started behind this marker. It went under the ridge, then came out near Rill.”

Elias looked behind it.

Only a rock face.

“How far?”

“Through the ridge? Half a mile.”

He stared at him.

“I can't hold my breath for half a mile.”

“I wasn't asking you to.”

Orin pointed at a narrow ledge running along the rock.

“We walk most of the way outside. There's one gap where the ledge fell. The old passage used to join it there.”

“How wide?”

“Six paces when I last came.”

“And when was that?”

Orin considered.

“Too long ago to promise six.”

Elias stood.

“Then we'll measure it.”

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The path beyond the marker was barely wide enough for one person.

Orin went first, testing the ground with his stick.

Mara followed. Elias came next. Ivo kept a few paces behind him.

They rounded the rock face.

The ledge ended.

Across a gap stood a wooden gate set beneath an overhang. Beyond it, the path continued around the far side of the ridge.

Six paces might once have been right.

Now Elias thought it was nearer eight.

He looked down, once, and immediately wished he hadn't.

“Don't open it yet,” Mara said.

“I know.”

They set the bags against the rock.

Orin lay down and looked across the gap, checking the far edge. Mara searched the ledge around them for the black needle-shaped scouts.

Ivo stood beside Elias.

“Same signal as yesterday?”

Elias raised his free hand.

“That one.”

Ivo nodded.

Along the vanished section of ledge, white outlines appeared.

They formed a covered walkway, its roof supported by rough wooden posts.

Elias described it.

Orin listened without interrupting.

“That's what used to be here,” he said.

“And the gate?”

“Rill's outer gate. They kept the path clear from that side.”

Elias looked at the medicine bag.

Before the map arrived, he had spent his days repairing routes for people who had somewhere to go.

Now three people waited for him to decide whether a route was safe.

“Just looking,” he said. “Nobody crosses.”

Mara stepped back.

Elias drew a breath and touched the first white post.

Wood formed beneath his fingers.

The walkway stretched across the gap.

At its far end, a woman stood behind the gate.

She was real enough to grip the bars.

Mara moved forward, then stopped herself.

“Medicine,” Mara called, lifting the padded bag.

The woman looked straight at Elias.

Her face changed.

“You're not her.”

His lungs tightened.

“Who?” Mara asked.

“The woman who opened it before.” She glanced behind her. “Close it. Before they hear.”

Elias let his breath go.

The walkway vanished.

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